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PLAN 2

Add:

  • title cards

  • intro  slides with context

  • transitions

  • historical context

  • integration to be more of a main quote

  • about childhood

  • picture from childhood and b-roll

  • Religion and holidays (inside versus outside the house)

  • Subtitles (not for draft 2)

Fix:

  • background sound

  • Decide whether or not to keep jasmines voice there

  • Level audio

  • Tell her story better

Remove:

  • Trump quote

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